Selasa, 04 Maret 2014

MY FIRST PUBLISHED IMAGINATION - Sci-Fi - Original - No Scam



            

- AN AMAZING SPACE ADVENTURE -





             Do you ever think what lies beyond our solar system ? Our galaxy ? Are we alone in this world ? Are we the only intelligent beings that can create awesome stuff ? Well, no one knows. And, if you never imagine something like that..., you can read my imagination of space travel...
            Earth, 2045... “We, have created a machine, a transportation, a real spaceship that can go further than we had ! It created because of an amazing teamwork which consist of the most intelligent scientist in this whole planet ! After years of their hard effort..., they bring this marvel of engineering to be seen by ourselves ! I..., the President Of The United States..., present you the U3S Democracy ! The U3S stands for United States Space Ship, it’s code name is STP-001..., it’s the short for Space Travel Project – 001 ! It’s crew members are Lieutenant Colonel Jackson, Captain Samuel, Commander James, Colonel Major Claire, and Colonel Frank ! Now, i’ll proudly let these brave selected astronauts to speak !”, announced the President.
            Neo-International Space Station ( Neo-ISS), 5th July 2045. “Yep, you’re cleared to release the safety locks and off to the space !” commanded the   Neo-ISS lead operator. The STP-001 released it locks and starts it’s advanced engine system. After that, Commander James replies “Affirmative Neo-ISS, STP-001 is cleared to launch”. “Received STP-001” replied the Neo-ISS lead operator.
            Inside the STP-001. “Okay, let’s bring this ship float !” said Commander James. “I feel a bit nervous about this !” said Colonel Major Claire. “Don’t say ‘a bit’, ‘cause you’re not the only one Colonel Major Claire !” said Captain Samuel. Then Colonel Major Claire replies “let’s just call ourselves with just our names.” Commander James replies, “Sure, that’s the deal, we need to be family for this long term journey.”
            After a lot of system checks, the STP-001 finally moves, and it’s speed is as fast as the speed of light. “Wow, there’s a lot of vibration there” said Frank. “Relax, first generation stuff never perfect” said Jackson. “Well, if the vibration is caused because the engine does not work perfectly, we should worry about it” said Claire. Then, laughs are heard inside the cabin.
            7th July 2045, just outside our solar system. “Hey, commander ! Do the scientist equipped this ship with self-defense system ?” asked Samuel. “America doesn’t reconize self-defense system, Samuel. If you meant was over 2500 kilograms of democracy, sure it does.” Replied James. “Wow, what the heck are those floating objects ?” said Claire. “Wha..what do you mean ?” asked Jackson. “What both of you discussing about ? What the %@#* !” Shouted James. Then, the STP-001 crews hear strange noises. Then, suddenly, the noises change to an understandable language. “What are you doing here... This is not your solar system...your ship isn’t registered to be allowed to enter Gaia Solar system as is a part of Zinyak Space Clan ! You, you are humans ! So, humans finally managed to get out of it’s own solar system, while we, Spriggans, the owner of the Gaia Solar System, has already discoreved space travel thousands of years earlier ! You weapons and defense systems are weak !” intimidated the spriggans. “Well, we’ve finally managed to have the first ever contacts with outsider though...” said James. “OUTSIDER ?! YOU FILTHY HUMANS ARE THE OUTSIDER !! NOW EAT THIS CANNON BLAST !!!”shouted the spriggans. Then, the spriggans shoot his cannon from his spaceship to the    STP-001. The shoot doesn’t effect the STP-001 at all.  “Soo, what happened ?” said Claire. “WHY IT DOESN’T WORKING ?!”shouted the spriggans. “Of course, we use different kinds of ceramic to layer our space ship” said James. “WHAT !! THE HUMANS HAVE AN UNKNOWN SUBSTANCE THAT THE SPRIGGANS DOES NOT KNOW ?! THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE !!!” shouted the spriggans. The James replies “Well, ceramic is just some kind of burned dirt, i think. But, as The Commander Of The U3S Democracy, which represent humans to space. I ordered my men to...shoot you !” STP-001 shoots it’s weakest weapon and desintegrate the spriggans space ship instanly. “Wow, this gun rocks !” said Jackson. “Well, we still got more stronger stuff though” said James.
13th July 2045, inside the core of the Gaia solar system.  “You have committed crimes againts Zinyak Space Clan and it’s member ! The penalty is... DEATH !”said the spriggans leader. Then, the whole spriggans army fires at STP-001. But, the STP-001 only vibrates. “Claire, damage report !”said James. Claire replies “Engine 100%, Shield 100%, Weapon 100%, and other stuff 100%, that doesn’t affect us at all !” James then ordered his crews “Prepare and fire our second strongest weapon !”. STP-001 fires destroy ¾ of the spriggans army. “RETREAT !!!” shouted the spriggans.
3rd August 2045, outside the Gaia Solar System. “Our spaceship sure the strongest !” said Frank. “Don’t be so sure because ceramics...” James replies. “If they claim to be better than us, why they doesn’t know what is ceramic ?” said Claire. Samuel replies, “Maybe Earth dirt is special, as far as i know, ceramic isn’t a substance. My opinion is just same as the commander.” James laughs. “Anyway, do you see a planet there ? The green, blue one ? Just look like Earth ! Let’s get there. But, we can’t risk this magnificent space ship. Let use the Hyperboat. Frank, activate STH-001 and STH-002 !”, said James. “Sure sir, Space Travel Hyperboat 1 and 2 activated.”,replies Frank. “Claire , follow me !” said James. “Suuurrreee...” Claire replies.
 Later, James and Claire arrived at the Earth look-alike. They landed. “I’m going to search for some rocks” said Claire. “What do you think this expedition is ? Mars expedition ? Let’s catch some living creature, or creatures if we can. Let’s just patrol using the Hyperboat.” Said James. Claire replies “Got it !”. Meanwhile, at the STP-001 crew cabin. “Hey Jackson, why do you think the commander ordered Claire to follow him ?” asked Frank. Jackson laughs. “Maybe if something bad happen, commander prefer to be stranded with a beautiful female instead.” Replies Jackson. Then, the computer AI (Artifical Intelligence) deliver a notification. “INCOMING MESSAGE”. “Wow, a message, let’s hear it out.” Said Samuel. “U3S Democracy, this is Commander Wendy, the Commander of U3S Andromeda, our code is STP-002, is closing at you.” After that, the message replays until Samuel close it.
             Then, James and Claire arrived back to STP-001. Samuel delivers the notification. As Samuel finished, they see a same sized and same shape Space ship. “There they are !” said Claire. Then, U3S Democracy opens a connections with U3S Andromeda. They shared information. And formed a group.  The  STP-001 and STP-002 travels around the Space together.
            5th July 2050, Neo-ISS. “STP-001 and STP-002, you are cleared to land at the NASA STP Docks.” Said the Neo-ISS lead operator. The STP-001 and STP-002 finally lands and taste the beautiful oxygen of Earth, after a long-long journey. Both space ship crews shared their experiences. The media staggered. “Claire, do you have any idea what Zinyak Space Clan center will be ?” asked James. “Nah, maybe just a place for arrogant fools.”
            Somewhere, in the wide space... “You humans think you are the best ? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!!” – random voice...

- THE END –
            Soooo, that’s the end. This story is my imagination of space. Well, not all of it. Just 1 piece of my imagination. Anyway.... I already write 1247 words now. Will be 1253 now. I’m tired. This story is great right....? This story is pretty much great. It will be truly awesome if it were a movie. This story is influenced by many movies, games, books. For example, “The Spriggans” is an NPC in the game Skyrim, you know, that great-amazing-moddable-great-graphics-game. But, i don’t actually satisfied with this story, i can make this story longer though. But, my schedule is full. Maybe i’ll edit this later.